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I Want What You Don't MAG

October 12, 2016
By 2shyy BRONZE, Bellevue, Nebraska
2shyy BRONZE, Bellevue, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The words were on their way, and when they arrived, she would hold them in her hands like clouds, and she would ring them out like the rain.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - Markus Zusak


I want to be

Unfettered,

Unrestricted,

From society's metal bars

Its perceptions

Of what I should do and don't do

Stronger than steel

And set deep in stone.

I want to be free.

Free to fight.

Free to find

Who think I should be.

Want to be sugar,

Be Superman,

Be my teacher's favorite pet,

Lick up her words of praise,

Be thunder,

Be thorns.

I want you

To keep your advice

To yourself,

Because

I don't want

To hear it.


The author's comments:

This poem is based off of a "letter" that I wrote from a mother to her maturing daughter detailing what it means to be the perfect woman. This is the daughter's reply.


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