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I hate splash water on the lack of there-forth

June 2, 2009
By Anonymous

i feel like im losing you
i feel like im not good enough, no matter what you say
thats why im clinging so hard.

i dont care
your a selfish and only love yourself

i dont understand it either
i dont know whats so wrong
it hurts, a lot
and i have scars
and im just setting myself up for therapy.

i feel like im copying you
like everyone thinks im a fake, a fraud
but im not, this is what makes me feel alive
at least, i think.

i hate god
i hate liars, and i hate gray areas
it conflicts, and doesnt make sense
and theres no proof
so i just cant.

i feel pity for people who are religious because they must be either
ignorant, or desperate for love
like me,

i doubt love is real.
its all fake, and just a game we play
so we feel like were worth something

and honestly,

i h a t e h o n e s t y .

it heavies your heart

and makes you jump out of delusional fraud

and splash water on the lack of there-forth

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on Apr. 11 at 11:32 am
MailleJ15 BRONZE, Belle Center, Ohio
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“Common sense is like deodorant. The people that need it most never use it” -Bill Murray

I feel this, I completely understand where you’re coming from and I’d love to read more of your work. I feel stuck in confusion and conflict in my own mind similar to this and it feels good to know I’m not the only one.

on Dec. 1 2023 at 4:27 pm
King_KDA DIAMOND, Burlington, Washington
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Trying hard to refrain from criticism.

on May. 4 2022 at 9:27 am
swaggyserr SILVER, Paris, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
“A small body of determined spirits fired by an unquenchable faith in their mission can alter the course of history.” ~Mahatma Gandhi

@connielee10809 it may not make sense to you because you cannot relate to their experience, and you can't tell me you've never made a spelling mistake- this is a very positive community so maybe try constructive criticism instead of using negativity!

on Apr. 10 2022 at 9:41 pm
Kingpoet2806 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
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Her heart was an open book with beautiful pages and detailed lettering. She wanted people to read her story in hopes that it would make them write their own. Instead, every person who came across the pages of her heart ripped out their favorite story and took it with them. They folded back pages and bent up corners. They signed their name with sloppy writing and with a simple 'goodbye'. This book is now tucked away in the darkest parts of her, because no one wants to read a tragic story with a bad ending.

@connielee10809 no need for the non positive comment we all make mistakes

on Apr. 3 2022 at 7:55 pm
ExcellentBoiledPotatoes SILVER, Dayton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
“Unless we are creators we are not fully alive” - Madeleine L’Engle

This is a beautiful insight into the soul. Thank you for your vulnerability and your pain, you are not alone in your thoughts and not wrong in your analyses of them. To search for God IS for those who are desperate for love- not desperate for just any kind of love, but for the all-understanding, perfect love that only He can give.

on Mar. 24 2022 at 8:42 pm
connielee10809 BRONZE, Fullerton, California
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"your a selfish and only love yourself"

on Mar. 24 2022 at 8:38 pm
connielee10809 BRONZE, Fullerton, California
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honestly, this doesn't make sense :D

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on Oct. 2 2021 at 11:19 pm
RaineyDay GOLD, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
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Incredible. Really love the torn-between ness of it.

on Apr. 8 2021 at 1:38 pm
poetofthedeepbluesea GOLD, Nashville, Tennessee
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Beautifully written! Keep writing :)

on Sep. 4 2020 at 2:51 pm
Buffalo_Soldier, Oakland, California
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I like this except I'm religious and I'm not ignorant or desperate for love. Putting that aside, you did a good job with the format.

on Oct. 12 2019 at 9:05 pm
Tifiwif_uwu BRONZE, Arlington, Texas
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This is soo good I love it keep making more

on Apr. 10 2019 at 3:27 am
Anaïs--- BRONZE, Neverland, Other
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“Maybe ever’body in the whole damn world is scared of each other.”

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"Honestly, I hate honesty." Beautiful. You can truly see the inner-conflict playing with every line. Well done!

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on Mar. 5 2019 at 1:32 pm
abby14 BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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This could be a song

on Jan. 24 2019 at 9:42 am
Madisonm2 BRONZE, Congers, New York
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