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Sound of Baseball

February 23, 2022
By nolanroney1 SILVER, Mt. Zion, Illinois
nolanroney1 SILVER, Mt. Zion, Illinois
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The ball whizzing

The Sprite fizzing

The grass smells sweet

As Sprite is a treat

The ball soars for a while

One taste of Sprite and you'll be in denial


The author's comments:

Since Sprite and baseball are similar in sounds, I compared them in this poem. I hope you enjoyed! Let me know if I can change anything! I appreciate it!


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on Mar. 3 2022 at 12:13 pm
nolanroney1 SILVER, Mt. Zion, Illinois
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@afra thank you!!!

Afra ELITE said...
on Mar. 3 2022 at 8:19 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Wonderful comparison!!! You've nothing to change...It is perfect the way it is...Keep writing...✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻