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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on May. 3 2010 at 9:44 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

I love this peom! Great job... it is very well written.

on May. 3 2010 at 8:55 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

It's the truth, thanks for writting this....it sums up how I've felt the past few years. Great rhyming btw:)

arimas SILVER said...
on May. 3 2010 at 8:34 pm
arimas SILVER, Columbia, South Carolina
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Some poems suck in rhyme, this is one of the precious few that own it. I love it, it speaks to so many people who have been in love with the wrong person. Wrong in so many perfectly right ways.

Everhart said...
on May. 3 2010 at 5:05 pm
Everhart, Boston, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am a fat girl, trapped in a normal girl's body."

Seriously. If you have to say something degrading, keep your mouth shut.

on May. 3 2010 at 4:31 pm
Anonymous01 PLATINUM, Baldwinsvillle, New York
29 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed."
-Ernest Hemingway

i love it ;D

on May. 3 2010 at 3:17 pm
love-hurts__i-know SILVER, Decatur, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i don't walk through my life, i strut through it!"

OMG this is like the best!!!!! why is it that all the guys i've ever like have been jerks?!?!!?

Lytle92 SILVER said...
on May. 3 2010 at 2:55 pm
Lytle92 SILVER, McLeansboro, Illinois
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tricks me into thinking you hate the person when you truly love them. I LOVE IT!!!!!!

young thug said...
on May. 3 2010 at 11:19 am

this poem is great it might be wierd but i liked it

 


on May. 3 2010 at 10:01 am
chartothalatte GOLD, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
10 articles 1 photo 62 comments
weird... well written, but weird.

on May. 3 2010 at 9:40 am

wow

wierd

im single


on May. 3 2010 at 9:39 am
grettelfinkster1234 BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Indiana
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm Hot.

If you say so.

on May. 3 2010 at 9:38 am
grettelfinkster1234 BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Indiana
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm Hot.

Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Well. This is verrrryyyyyyy disturbing. But I think I ummmmm like it. Maybe.

on May. 3 2010 at 9:19 am
PrincessBethyyy GOLD, Knoxville, Tennessee
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Being happy doesn't mean everythings perfect, it means looking past the imperfections in life." -Gerard Way.

I like. =]

piper said...
on May. 3 2010 at 9:13 am
wow its kinda funny how this is so much like my life it was good keep writing

Mizzie.Kelli said...
on May. 3 2010 at 8:42 am
This is a very good poem for someone who has just broken up wit a jerky guy. It can relate to almost all women who have dated in the past

on May. 3 2010 at 8:06 am
invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
14 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
there is nothing so common as the wish to be remarkable

it was amazing you took the feeling we all get one time or another, and put it into words. that's something i just could never do. check mine out. if you have time. please. and keep writing

 


batty25 said...
on May. 3 2010 at 8:02 am
This poem has a good meaning, and it is funny and ironic. Write some more poems and check out my writing please.

Music4eva said...
on May. 1 2010 at 2:56 am
tehee this is so good

clairepoetry said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 10:05 am
same here haha 

on Apr. 28 2010 at 12:47 pm
Sarx96_Alas BRONZE, Springdale, Arkansas
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hail to the king, baby."

How do you tell if a guy is a jerk or not?  Are they just not respectful???   IDK?? :)