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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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xxCMMx16 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:15 am
i liked the poem. do you go out with the JERK? You should keep on writing
derickaa said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:06 am
astonishing ,
ryne8 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:58 am
good poem nice and short
thugggaasouras said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:57 am
this is really good (:
geeebabyy22 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:55 am
good but why do you still like a jerk like this?
xo0amanda17 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:55 am
this is a really good poem, but the jerk needs to go :)
Victoriaaa14 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:55 am
Good rhyming. It was a touching poem some people can relate too. Good peom(:
karinaaaxo0 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:50 am
Good rhyming in this poem(: I also like the story behinmd it.
asdfgh said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:50 am
I Love The Rhyming, It Was Really Good(:
DiNiGirl4444 said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 1:49 pm
This is okay.
family_includes_I GOLD said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 3:13 pm
are you a mind reader?!? i know someone just like this!
Demon_of_Truth said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 2:24 pm
I liked the idea behind the poem, but the way you presnted it didn't seem that differnet, unlike the idea. I like the contrast there; great job!
TaylorDean BRONZE said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 2:23 pm
:)This is Great!!! I love it! and not to long ago I had a Jerk but know he is long GONE!
soccerchickunc BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 8:00 pm
i really like this (: it does have a great flow & rhyme scheme (:
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 5:51 pm
this is sweet.. but its a little on the ordinary side.. like you were trying more to rhyme then be original... but its still has a nice beat
Team Edward! said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 5:38 pm
yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Team Edward! said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 5:35 pm
i agree! great flow, it doesn't have a superficial meaning!
Adele Campbell BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 5:27 pm
I like it, I think it has great flow. Although, i don't think it has a superficial meaning.
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