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Two heartbeats

June 7, 2013
By Jazmyne805 GOLD, Kuala Lumpur, Other
Jazmyne805 GOLD, Kuala Lumpur, Other
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My heart skips a beat every time I hear your name
You’re the reason I go through life’s motions
Since then, I was never the same
As I carried myself through this emotion

You’re the reason I go through life’s motions
No other thought could fill my mind
I wish to throw you my devotion
And I want to call you mine

No other thought could fill my mind
Since then, I was never the same
And I want to call you mine
My heart skips a beat every time I hear your name


The author's comments:
This is my first time writing a pantoum. I hope you guys would enjoy it as much as I did when writing it.

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Jun. 28 2013 at 4:46 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

We all want this; and have been through this. When we meet that person that rattles the dormant butterflies in our stomachs. And makes out hearts skip beats. I feel this poem to be genuine, not overly dramatic. But sincere. And I hope you do end up with the person you love and that makes your "heart skip a beat every time [you] hear [his/her] name."