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November 15, 2014
By Clary_Fray DIAMOND, Castro Valley, California
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Clary_Fray DIAMOND, Castro Valley, California
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foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of the mind<br /> -rwe

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when the sky clouds under

and the sun caves out

when the birds stay silent

and the night is bright

a happy little child

standing accompanied in bed

slept like a rock

was under its head

the words turned forward

the faces smiling

the happy cries

of small ones' remorse

when big ones die.

 

 

 

 

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Clary_Fray DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 27 2014 at 12:29 pm
Clary_Fray DIAMOND, Castro Valley, California
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foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of the mind<br /> -rwe

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Thank you so much! Each time I publish a new piece I'm unsure of whether people will take to it or completely discard it, and each time you leave a beautiful comment on my page that just lifts me up. Thank you so much! <3 <3 <3
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 24 2014 at 1:21 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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I found this beautiful yet rather sad too. It's absolutely, breath-taking and phonemonela. It has so much, beauty and rawness and simplicity yet power in it. It also has emotion and rawness swirling in your poem, in your words.    All I can say is that I'm touched, and that I am glad that I know you for you are a wonderful and amazing and talentedd writer, filled with light and greatness and talent. :)   Thank you so much, my friend! For sharing this. :)