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March 29, 2013
By -Char SILVER, Apple Valley, California
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-Char SILVER, Apple Valley, California
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"I see now that the circumstances of ones birth are irrelevant. It is what you do with the gift of life that determines who you are" -Mewtwo

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I don't know what to do here
I'm confused, you see?
I'm living in fear
Just put me out of my misery..

If not,
Then I'll do it for you
I know what you're thinking: "great Scott!"
Maybe I'll become a ghost..BOO

Yeah, I know I'm depressing
But I wasn't always like this
Used to be funny. Like tomska and bing
Right right now life's a swing and miss

I might quit life, I might not.
Just please don't put me on the spot.

-Char

© Mitrah A., Austin, TX

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Tomska and bing are funny YouTube stars.
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CrayCrayThePhotographer SILVER said...
on Jun. 5 2013 at 7:04 pm
CrayCrayThePhotographer SILVER, Apple Valley, California
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Sweetheart, Your a great poet. Never change. Yes this on is depressing, but still great. like you. ~K
-Char SILVER said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 6:05 pm
-Char SILVER, Apple Valley, California
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"I see now that the circumstances of ones birth are irrelevant. It is what you do with the gift of life that determines who you are" -Mewtwo

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Thanks, ill work on it:)
thatunknownthing DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 6 2013 at 10:38 am
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Your piece is frank, right out of your head. But it's my suggestion that you might want to refine it and improve on it, or probaly wor dit better to make a more captivating poem. This piece reflects a hint of writing that can be greatly developed. But keep going!!!