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October 26, 2012
By Ricoo22 BRONZE, Grundy, Virginia
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For every dark night there is a brighter day- 2pac<br /> There is a reason your heart is on the left because its not always right- wiz khalifa

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Does he ever treat you as if you are his heaven?
You fight a battle called love in which u never win,
You Seemed down last time we talked, are you okay?
Just think of all the little things you never heard him say.
Why do you stick around when you hurt yourself alone?
Y'all fight constantly weather in person or on the phone.
You deserve much better than him how can you not know,
That you need a love unlike the kind you've been shown
Look to me and I'll be there to catch your falling tears
With gentle lips that will cast away all emotional fears
My embrace would protect you from having pain again
And my heart would tell you that you are my heaven

© Brian B.,Highland Village, TX

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Women should leave a guy that doesn't treat them right, every woman deserves a man that hold them as his heaven.
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