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Love Lost

August 10, 2011
By Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant<br /> Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall<br /> Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me


I loved and i lost
I put my heart out and was dropped
Like a stone to the ground
Who thought it was sky bound

Now i sit and i wait
On my unmistakeable fate
Were you my one and only
Or just another phony

You hurt me in a way
That is not known by many
But when it is known
The pain is a plenty

I hope your next lust
Is a cheat and a liar
So you will feel like i did
When you threw me into the fire



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on Sep. 12 2012 at 8:06 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant<br /> Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall<br /> Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Ikr! Lol apply cold water to burns :p

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on Aug. 21 2012 at 8:42 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine.&quot; Ludwig van Beethoven

the last line is like ,"ooohhhh buuurrrrnnnn."  But it's a good poem :D

on Jun. 16 2012 at 9:41 pm
TMarie42 SILVER, Orland, California
7 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Pulvis et umbra sumus.

LOVE the last stanza! I can easily relate!

on Jun. 16 2012 at 9:18 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
18 articles 0 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.&rdquo; - Doctor Seuss

I can totally relate to this. These feeling ssuck, i knwo. really good

 


on May. 6 2012 at 3:42 pm
RebeccaMey SILVER, Poughkeepsie, New York
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Favorite Quote:
If you love it let it go. If it comes back to you its yours to keep.

This is really good! I like the rhyming scheme.

on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:41 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant<br /> Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall<br /> Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

haha...odd...but i think i understand :p

on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:56 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

This is good.  After reading this, I had the sudden urge to quote Darth Vader.

on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:54 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

wow this is very strong. i love it. i love many things about it. ur very talented :) maybe u could read mine? 

on Aug. 25 2011 at 3:51 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant<br /> Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall<br /> Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Thanks! I'll be sure to read yours when i get a chance.

on Aug. 24 2011 at 6:01 pm
taterbug235 SILVER, Flora, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never underestimate the impossible.

wow!!!! i love this poem. you are rly talented! im also just starting i hope people will read mine:)

on Aug. 24 2011 at 4:01 pm
AmandaElizabeth PLATINUM, Fulton, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Believe that life is worth living and your belief will help create the fact.&quot;

Anytime. I'm just starting out too. And I agree. :)

on Aug. 24 2011 at 11:36 am
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant<br /> Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall<br /> Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Thanks :). Im just starting out and this was probably one of my best.

on Aug. 23 2011 at 4:25 pm
AmandaElizabeth PLATINUM, Fulton, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Believe that life is worth living and your belief will help create the fact.&quot;

This is actually pretty good. XD