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May 14, 2010
By Anonymous

I saw a commercial on the TV.
For “Car Insurance” the gecko said to me.
He assured me there was nothing to it.
It's so easy a caveman can do it!
It was easy! Not how other insurances are just a big Riddle.
Did I save money? Can Charlie Daniels play a mean fiddle?
BAM! I crashed, crippling two cars.
Like when Elmer Fudd has trouble saying his “R's.”
They fixed up my car, now I'm roaming free!
I always feel like somebody's watching me.
Now I drive with full reassurance.
15 minutes saved me 15% and more on car insurance.


The author's comments:
I really like Geico commercials, so I wrote a poem about it.

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on Nov. 28 2013 at 7:07 pm
LostInThoughts BRONZE, Heath Springs, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"People haven't always been there for me, but music always has!!" -Taylor Swift

Great Job!! I got a good laugh out of it!! But it is things like this I love to read!!!! Amazing Job!! Very creative and cute. Made my day reading it!!!!! :):):):):):)

on Feb. 26 2012 at 8:34 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
6 articles 9 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

I thought this was an amazingly cute poem. Great job! I liked the rhymes and, personally, I enjoyed the rythm. It helps if you read it aloud. Great job!

PJD17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 4:40 pm
PJD17 SILVER, Belleville, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 624 comments

Favorite Quote:
I do the best imatation of myself- Ben Folds

They sort of already did make a commercial out of it   the author took quite a few lines from the commercials   still good  but that srt of bothers me

on Apr. 22 2011 at 4:19 pm
14hipkri PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
22 articles 10 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Is that when you get you're thinger off you're thinger?"-Eric Stopper

They should make a commercial out of it! It would be awesome! Very creative poem, never seen anything like it before.

xoteryn BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2011 at 9:01 pm
xoteryn BRONZE, Landenberg, Pennsylvania
1 article 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Shoot for the moon--if you miss, you will land somewhere among the stars.\"

haha i like it a lot! very original thing to write about :)