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My first love song

May 4, 2010
By frankiefall3n SILVER, Thornwood, New York
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if every simple word i say can take your breathe away id say them all.
if only you can see every smile on my face it would make your heart miss a beat.
if anyone trys to come between us our love grows stronger.
we planted all the seeds to sprout a beautfil rose.

now i honestly think this is how love goes.

for the devils wrath cant even put me down.
i grabbed the devil shook him and god accepted me.
he showed me the sky and stars.
he showed me how to love.
one last thing he showed me you.
you took the broom and sweeped my broken heart in a dust pan.
the pieces just fit together like puzzle pieces.

i express my love lyrically.
but each lyric i write cant describe it.
forever my heart beats your name even as a drift off.
i close my eyes and the distantance dissapears.

the hazey clouds in my mind fade away.
the trees no longer fall in the howling wind.
the grass begins to get greener.
and earthquakes could never shake us.

lightining will never blind us.
flames will never burn us.
thunder will never make us def

my thoughts spoke out to you, when everything seemed so true

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my feelings towards my girlfriend, she absolutly loved this so im hoping you guys will too
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ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 11:27 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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I'll get right on that!!
frankiefall3n SILVER said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 11:19 am
frankiefall3n SILVER, Thornwood, New York
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You're just the best haha

Did you read my new piece yet called "Growth"?

ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 10:53 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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ok. I just wrote that letter- er email. yep! yeah but you dont have to love me. It might not even make a big difference or anything. they might not even read it. :(
frankiefall3n SILVER said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 6:56 pm
frankiefall3n SILVER, Thornwood, New York
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haha DO IT!!

I'd love you forever and ever lol

ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 11:56 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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haha yeah! maybe I'll write a letter...
frankiefall3n SILVER said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 11:52 am
frankiefall3n SILVER, Thornwood, New York
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I don't know how many times I can say thank you, but thank you!

I don't know why I'm not published yet haha

ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 11:14 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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well. I definately think otherwise! It's so good!!! :)
frankiefall3n SILVER said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 11:03 am
frankiefall3n SILVER, Thornwood, New York
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Thank you :]

Even though sometimes I think my stuff sucks.. I guess people think otherwise.

ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 11:01 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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That's pretty obvious! All your stuff is great!
frankiefall3n SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 10:55 am
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Thank you :]

It's what I do best write soulful pieces

ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 10:54 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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Reading you work makes me want to lay down and write forever. You've inspired me!
respecturself7 SILVER said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 5:00 am
respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
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There is a natural law in life to settle.....I broke that law ~Katherine Hepburn <br /> Love, Is the severest of mental diseases~U.K.<br /> Spinning always spinning....when life puts me down I&#039;ll give you a call~respecturself7

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I've read all your stuff.....amazing!  Check out my work if you can. Keep writing you have an amazing voice!