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April 5, 2010
By Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
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"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

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The rain will come and go,
The stars will shine and glow.
The world turns 'round and 'round,
And the thunder will give a great sound.

Let the wind and rain take away all of my pain,
Let the angels sing a beautiful harmony tonight.

All of this sight,
Kisses me goodnight.
Flowers galore,
The moon lights up my bedroom floor.

Let the sunshine warm,
Let the butterflies swarm.
My hear beats happily,
With the crickets song of glee.

The wind and rain took away all of my pain,
The angels sang a beautiful harmony tonight.

© Michelle L., Suffern, NY

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Puff_the_dragon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 7:05 pm
Puff_the_dragon PLATINUM, Monroe, North Carolina
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Love can be lost but it will never be forgotten

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thats amazing, thats better than most of my stuff of course i hate asome of my stuff cuz i get most of my inspiration by love
_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 4:34 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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- I stare danger in the face and giggle<br /> - Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference<br /> -R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)<br /> -Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

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beautiful is all i can say. 5/5. i envy your rhyming skills. i hope to read more of your poems. btw-can you check out some of my stuff?
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 4:35 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
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&quot;the greatest thing you&#039;ll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return.&quot; -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

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thanks, im glad u liked it
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 2:04 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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&quot;You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo.&quot;~ Lauren Lopez in Starship<br /> &quot;If you don&#039;t die for something, I&#039;ll kill you for nothing.&quot;~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

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This was nice.
Inherinerd GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 7:58 am
Inherinerd GOLD, Ashland, Ohio
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me too!!!!
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 11:13 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
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THANK U!!! im a total rhyming freak....i luv poems that rhyme.
Inherinerd GOLD said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 6:26 pm
Inherinerd GOLD, Ashland, Ohio
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YESSSSS!!!! Finally a poem that rhymes on here!!!! It was beautifully written! I loved it. Poems are better when they rhyme!! *^_^*
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 5:47 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
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&quot;the greatest thing you&#039;ll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return.&quot; -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

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i know not every poem needs rhyming, but it seems to make it more fun to write when u have rhyming. THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS!! your opinions always matter
OfficialApprover PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 4:05 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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I really liked this, it was beautifully put and well-worded--nice rhythm, and nice meaning.  Good job.
KK2013 GOLD said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 1:48 pm
KK2013 GOLD, Solon, Ohio
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Interesting, but I don't see the need for rhyming, because in this case it seems as if you had to work in order to get a rhyme, so the coherence and fluidity isn't all there. 

Also, I think that the thunder part should be after the world turning, because the world turning seems to be more important to the piece!