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Nothing but a Player

February 2, 2010
By WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s not about success; it&#039;s about significance.<br /> <br /> No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.


I'm older and wiser
Now I see what I did wrong
I'm hurting and crying
That's why I'm singing this song
I gave you my trust but you betrayed it
You didn't do your part
You're nothing but a player
Who broke my heart

The author's comments:
This song is for all you girls out there who have been cheated on, lied to, or forced to take a relationship too fast like I was. I'm sorry you all had to be put through that.

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on Oct. 14 2010 at 4:12 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s not about success; it&#039;s about significance.<br /> <br /> No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Thanks, that was the idea for this poem, to make it short, sweet and to the point, but fit a lot of emotion into it at the same time. I'm so glad you like it! :)

on Oct. 13 2010 at 5:36 am
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
30 articles 0 photos 412 comments

Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

i like this. its short and sweet, but delivers a great emssage that most people can relate to(:

on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:49 pm
beautifuldisaster18, Arlington, Texas
0 articles 1 photo 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep your feet on the ground, When your head&#039;s in the clouds.

I definitely know I can relate to this!

on Jul. 26 2010 at 1:22 am
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s not about success; it&#039;s about significance.<br /> <br /> No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Thanks, I'm glad you like this poem and I'm glad you have never been in a situation like the one the poem describes. I was so naive back then and I feel so stupid now for falling for the school player and I wish so much that I could take everything back. But we learn from our mistakes and I know I'll never make this same mistake again. And I wish you all the happiness in your new relationship. :)

on Jul. 25 2010 at 8:27 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

I really like the honesty and truth behind this. And obviously i bet MANY people can relate to it. I don't happen to be one of them (thankfully), and i hope i never am. But i feel as though it will eventually happen to us all....sadly. I just entered into a relationship and i am very happy and thankful:) we have liked eachother A VERY LOT, for over three years now, and now we're together. i hope everything works out as well as it has been and that it never comes to this. i really appriciate the poem and what it symbolizes to many women and how we are treated and let down. good job!

on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:45 am
alenkaaa BRONZE, Battle Ground, Washington
2 articles 2 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
I&#039;m falling apart, I&#039;m barely breathing. With a broken heart. Thats still beating...

This is really good!! Good Job!

on Jul. 10 2010 at 3:45 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

This is awesome !Many girls can relate to this , this is VERY true . keep it up

on Jul. 5 2010 at 6:48 pm
just-a-joy GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
12 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eminem: Success is my only option, failure&#039;s not

tanx i because some times i dont thinkguys know how it feel

on Jun. 14 2010 at 7:10 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s not about success; it&#039;s about significance.<br /> <br /> No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it. I really appreciate the feedback. Feel free to check out some of my other work and comment those too. :)

on Jun. 14 2010 at 6:47 pm
SarahJumps SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people. <br /> -Eleanor Roosevelt<br /> <br /> I think, at a child&#039;s birth, if a mother could ask a fairy godmother to endow it with the most useful gift, that gift should be curiosity. -E.R

I really really love how short and truly to the point. it's written so well, you delivered the message in only a few meaningful lines

on Jun. 14 2010 at 5:37 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s not about success; it&#039;s about significance.<br /> <br /> No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Thank you.

on Jun. 14 2010 at 12:06 am
SarahJumps SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people. <br /> -Eleanor Roosevelt<br /> <br /> I think, at a child&#039;s birth, if a mother could ask a fairy godmother to endow it with the most useful gift, that gift should be curiosity. -E.R

very pretty :)

Milo! said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 9:03 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.