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Betrayed
January 21, 2010
The mind is a spring
You just have to
Find the catch
The mind is like spring
Rainy and
Sweet
The mind is a spring
It may not be wide
Nor deep
But you never know what
Surprises it will
Spring
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This article has 3 comments.
I think it's good under the title 'betrayed'. It shows how life sends surprises at you, and your certainty might betray you when life takes it's own path.
just a side note, i noticed on your profile that you live in Israel and I would like to say that that is VERY COOL. I met a boy at camp once and fell so in love for the 2 weeks that the camp was going on. Then he moved to Isreal and I haven't seen him since. That was three years ago and I'm still thinking about him. he had/has no idea.
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:13 am
TeenInk messed up, this is not what I submitted under the title "Betrayed". I'll try and re-submit the actual piece.
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That's a funny coincidence...I moved to Israel three years ago too :D
I wrote this under the title "Spring"...it's not really a serious poem, I was just playing around with all the different meanings of the word. The "real" Betrayed piece is actually about a betrayal that happened in my life.