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Once I become a star

February 14, 2022
By Afra DIAMOND, Kandy, Other
Afra DIAMOND, Kandy, Other
79 articles 7 photos 1682 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can’t ask other people to believe you and vote for you if you don’t back yourself."
-Jacinda Ardern-

"If I can make someone's day brighter, happier, better, that makes me happier."
-Ava Max-

"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

"A Bridge Has Two Sides."
-Elsa- (Fictional character- Frozen)

“I knew who I was as a girl but I had to find who I was as a woman.”
-Delta Goodrem-


I shall be having many irons in the fire

My fans, I shall never ever tire

They shall recognise me, even if I am far

Once I become a star

 

Selfies clicking, lipgloss popping, clickety pop

Once they see me, due to Felicity, they shall hop

I shall get down from a grandeur car

Once I become a star

 

I shall sing a melody, and like the wind I'll dance

I shall go on a Holiday to find love in France

My heart will be like how honey is in a jar

Once I become a star

 

Everyone shall know my name; I'll have fame

And I'll go on with my hypnotic game

I'll have shindigs in an expensive bar

Once I become a star

 

But, all I want, all I need, all I desire

is only to be burning and spreading like fire

I wish to live as free as a falcon without stress

And live a life without drama or paparazzi-mess

If I don't get that wish fulfilled, I'll be a bourgeois

Even if I become a star



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Afra DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 6 at 9:53 am
Afra DIAMOND, Kandy, Other
79 articles 7 photos 1682 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can’t ask other people to believe you and vote for you if you don’t back yourself."
-Jacinda Ardern-

"If I can make someone's day brighter, happier, better, that makes me happier."
-Ava Max-

"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

"A Bridge Has Two Sides."
-Elsa- (Fictional character- Frozen)

“I knew who I was as a girl but I had to find who I was as a woman.”
-Delta Goodrem-

@13bookworm4596, thank you so much for your overwhelming comments!!!

on Jul. 4 at 7:39 pm
13bookworm4596 SILVER, Mantua, Ohio
7 articles 4 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stay gold, Ponyboy." -Johnny Cade (S.E. Hinton)
"One moment of pain is worth a lifetime of glory." - Louis Zamperini

I love all the rhymes in this! and the vocab/ words. btw, i think you are a star. just look at your beautiful writing

Afra DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 25 at 11:39 am
Afra DIAMOND, Kandy, Other
79 articles 7 photos 1682 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can’t ask other people to believe you and vote for you if you don’t back yourself."
-Jacinda Ardern-

"If I can make someone's day brighter, happier, better, that makes me happier."
-Ava Max-

"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

"A Bridge Has Two Sides."
-Elsa- (Fictional character- Frozen)

“I knew who I was as a girl but I had to find who I was as a woman.”
-Delta Goodrem-

@CaliFranceGurl648, Thank you for the feedback...

Afra DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 25 at 11:38 am
Afra DIAMOND, Kandy, Other
79 articles 7 photos 1682 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can’t ask other people to believe you and vote for you if you don’t back yourself."
-Jacinda Ardern-

"If I can make someone's day brighter, happier, better, that makes me happier."
-Ava Max-

"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

"A Bridge Has Two Sides."
-Elsa- (Fictional character- Frozen)

“I knew who I was as a girl but I had to find who I was as a woman.”
-Delta Goodrem-

@IzzyMossie137, thank you...

on Feb. 24 at 2:16 pm
CaliFranceGurl648 GOLD, San Diego, California
11 articles 1 photo 125 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I am a California girl, born and raised, so flip-flops and cutoff shorts are my go-to look."

– Meghan Markle

Clickety pop is a really beautiful onomatopoeia. And the idiomatic language is really beautiful especially the first line. Nice work, Writing-Star Afra.

on Feb. 24 at 2:08 pm
IzzyMossie137 GOLD, Aurora, Illinois
11 articles 1 photo 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is a journey I don't have a map for."
-Delta Goodrem-

You're already a star in here, Afra. Nice poem!