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July 25, 2011
By Vicky11 SILVER, Charlottenlund, Other
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Vicky11 SILVER, Charlottenlund, Other
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The wisest men follow their own direction - Euripides

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See, and you'll see a

haiku. Wish to see, and you

will see a meaning.

© Claire E., Bethesda, MD

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billgamesh11 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 27 2011 at 10:22 am
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

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Wow That should be the Webster definition of a haiku!!!:):):);)
austenite GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 10:21 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
13 articles 0 photos 177 comments

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...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

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Even though its short (duh, its haiku!), it's got an interesting/clever message. :)  Great job!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 5:10 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

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"I can do anything!"

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I don't understand it, but that might just be me!
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 8:26 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

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‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

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Good job though kind of repetitive :)))
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 4:24 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

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I really like this and I love the meaning!!!!!!!!!!! :D
HopelessTurtle BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 3:51 pm
HopelessTurtle BRONZE, ., Other
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"Life's too short to be organized" - Kendall Schmidt

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I really love this ;)
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 2:37 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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One of the rare haikus I like. And this one I love.
ohheyyyelli SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 12:49 pm
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
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I love this!!!!! You don't even know how amazing this is. Really original too.
Shadow878 GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 12:21 pm
Shadow878 GOLD, Marion, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I tell you the truth, unless you change and become like little children, you will never enter the kingdom of heaven." Matthew 18:3

"Do not pray for easy lives, pray to be stronger men." JFK

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"Anyone who doesn’t believe in miracles is not a realist."
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"An eye for an eye makes the world go blind" Gandi

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This is awesome! I don't even know how to give any contructive critcism for this on lol
akrreid BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 11:28 am
akrreid BRONZE, Wexford, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

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"I never said it was going to be easy--I said it was going to be worth it."

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I really like this haiku! It's very interesting and intriguing.
JTboiiDrama PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 11:25 am
JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
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It is what it is

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sweet simple and genuinly informative I love this piece you should keep writing!=)