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A Best Friend's Test
September 16, 2009
I am losing him
The church has been recruiting
Is he happier?
Memories are hope
The traits we shared are fleeting
Are my hopes futile?
So quickly he changed
I never thought it'd happen
She has ruined him
He has ruined her
The feelings all forgotten
Unobtainable
Unerasable
Each traumatic memory
Were they worth it?
A love found elsewhere
One of few loves I can't share
Forgetting himself
Rebirth is a death
He died and yet still he clings
I am growing tired
The reasons are null
Though he believes he is found
I am losing him.
© Sarah S., Marblehead, MA
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cheer1018 said...
on Jan. 6 2011 at 12:31 pm
Great haiku. I read it a few times to fully understand it but once i did i though it was amazing! It can relate to a lot of people because im sure they have felt the same way. Even though i can't relate, i think you did a great job because i was still moved.
Us :) said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:06 pm
I really liked this piece of writing, even though it did take a minute to figure out. it all flowed together! It was pashinyish. :P
JenniferB. SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2009 at 5:50 pm
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on Sep. 25 2009 at 12:39 pm
this is good.
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