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Heart of Thorns

March 23, 2016
By Devils-0wn BRONZE, League City, Texas
Devils-0wn BRONZE, League City, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
ÿesterday was history, tomorrow is a mystery, today is a gift; that is why the call it the present.


It’s a scolding sensation. Starting from the inside out. Fire inside my lungs. I cry out in pain; even though I know no one can hear me. Slithering down my arms and legs, eventually to my fingers and toes. My entire body engulfed with this sensation.
Looking down my heart is ripped out. This soulless, careless monster holding it. My eyes water faucets, pouring down my face. I struggle against the restraints. Giving up I hang my head down in shame.
“I’m so sorry my love, I can’t fight anymore.”
With that, this monster squeezes my heart. Pain like no other rips through me. My last cry was his name.


The author's comments:

i had wrote this piece after my love was taken away from me. 


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on May. 2 2016 at 5:10 pm
Devils-0wn BRONZE, League City, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
ÿesterday was history, tomorrow is a mystery, today is a gift; that is why the call it the present.

it is how i felt when my love was taken away from me

on Apr. 27 2016 at 11:48 am
chessi.maria PLATINUM, Brooksville, Maine
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This is heartbreaking!