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Just to Feel You MAG

January 20, 2009
By Jenny Goldberger BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
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i would reveal my vulnerability
and deploy emotion-satiated drops
down the contours of my face
just to feel your fingertips
whisper reassuring secrets
across my eager skin
as you blockade a stream of defenselessness
from flowing into
the corners of my lips

© Narongsukchai T., Sachse, TX

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Fia-fia BRONZE said...
on Feb. 27 2012 at 7:37 pm
Fia-fia BRONZE, Bethesda, Maryland
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This is simply amazing!! So well written and thought out!! I recently got back with my ex, and this is the story of my life! Thank you soooo much and keep up the fantastic work!!

:)

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on Jan. 4 2012 at 1:00 pm
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i like faygo!!!!

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on May. 16 2011 at 8:53 pm
reblep GOLD, Chester, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
the sun through my window, warming my skin...

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i can't even put into words how much i love this! awesome job. 
megpie000 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 6:15 pm
megpie000 PLATINUM, Marietta, Georgia
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&quot;Give generously to him and do so without a grudging heart; then because of this the Lord you God will bless you in all your work and in everything you put your hand to.&quot; Deuteronomy 15:10

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i dont think im that good but ur like brilliant
jenny said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 5:57 pm
Ha Megan you shouldn't be at all I think you're really good too :]
megpie000 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 3:46 pm
megpie000 PLATINUM, Marietta, Georgia
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&quot;Give generously to him and do so without a grudging heart; then because of this the Lord you God will bless you in all your work and in everything you put your hand to.&quot; Deuteronomy 15:10

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Jenny ur an amazing writer! im super jealous of how good u r!!!! :D
foreverdreaming14 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 5:06 pm
foreverdreaming14 PLATINUM, Redmond, Washington
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Absolutely beautiful.
jenny said...
on Dec. 10 2009 at 8:50 pm
dude, you have no idea how much i appreciate that. thank you!! :]
TaylorMarieD SILVER said...
on Dec. 10 2009 at 8:31 pm
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I can't believe no one has commented on how brilliant this is. I love how brief it is, I think that increases the impact.