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January 21, 2009
By kirabonk GOLD, Romeoville, Illinois
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The setting sun paints cozy rectangles
Across the floor where I sit,
The temperature tugging my eyelids.
As I lie down, swiftly succumbing,
Your words are my lullaby.

© Kristin D., Bremerton, WA

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kirabonk GOLD said...
on May. 31 2011 at 2:12 pm
kirabonk GOLD, Romeoville, Illinois
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Thank you for your comment (even though I am replying two years later). I hope all is well!
kirabonk GOLD said...
on May. 31 2011 at 2:11 pm
kirabonk GOLD, Romeoville, Illinois
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Thank you, Zero- I agree, the picture fits.
kirabonk GOLD said...
on May. 31 2011 at 2:10 pm
kirabonk GOLD, Romeoville, Illinois
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Thanks for your comment, I like how you described the order of the poem.
kirabonk GOLD said...
on May. 31 2011 at 2:10 pm
kirabonk GOLD, Romeoville, Illinois
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Thank you- I love the dog picture, too!

 

kirabonk GOLD said...
on May. 31 2011 at 2:09 pm
kirabonk GOLD, Romeoville, Illinois
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Thank you!
kirabonk GOLD said...
on May. 31 2011 at 2:09 pm
kirabonk GOLD, Romeoville, Illinois
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Thank you so much, I appreciate it!
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nice poem....rated u 5/5....good job.....am loving it......
reblep GOLD said...
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brief but full of detail. you tell so much without saying a lot at all. 
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Nicee poem! The picture of a dog sleeping added to it makes it that much more adorable and great! Great job! :-)
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It's very interesting. I love how the main writting part is about the scenery and then the last words are the story. Very well done!
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Cute! The picture is perfect for this poem!

-Blessed Be!

+++ZERO+++
SaraB. GOLD said...
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I like how you managed to depict the whole situation in so few words. Congratulations on getting published!