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She Gave Herself An A

April 3, 2015
By AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
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&quot;It takes more strength to cry at mid-defeat.&quot;<br /> -Susan Boyle<br /> &quot;The closer you get to the light, the bigger your shadow becomes.&quot;<br /> -Kingdom Hearts

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She gave herself an A
Because her aspirations flew free
She gave herself a B
For her broken abilities
She gave herself a C
For lack of concious time
She gave herself a D
For finding doubt all over her mind
She gave herself an F
Because failures ruled her life
She gave herself every grade in the book
And so ended her eternal strife.

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

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Nightingale74 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 4 2015 at 2:23 am
Nightingale74 PLATINUM, Beavercreek, Ohio
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&quot;When you need something to believe in, believe in yourself.&quot;<br /> &quot;A poem unwritten is only a thought; unshared, unsaid...&quot;

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This is an interesting little poem...I enjoyed reading it! Thanks for posting :)
casey_lg PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 15 2015 at 12:23 pm
casey_lg PLATINUM, Clemmons, North Carolina
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I agree with @Consalvator , but this is very impressive. Very honest and a well-explained message.
Consalvator BRONZE said...
on Jun. 29 2015 at 10:41 am
Consalvator BRONZE, South Jordan, Utah
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I really enjoyed the style of this poem. I could relate a lot. My only suggestion is changing the last line because it's not in harmony with the rest of the poem (in my opinion). It kinda felt like a red herring. Other than that, the emotion behind the piece was very real and passionate, and I really liked the flow of it.
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM said...
on May. 21 2015 at 4:32 pm
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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interesting........ It seems like someone broke the heart of a nerdy girl and caused some sort of intellectual nightmare.. I like this poem, good job :) Keep writing, and I'm goin on to tha next one