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(Apparently) In Love With The Editor

December 31, 2014
By Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

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Once again,

I have cut my heart in two 

and surrendered

in front of you.

Please,

do not hesitate,

not now,

go ahead and tell me

my words have

been said

enough.

I have let you

so make me feel

as though

my heart is just not

red

enough.

© Logan C., Clemmons, NC

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Now That's relatable!

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Author said...
on Oct. 19 2015 at 8:34 am
Dear readers, I'm sorry for the (obnoxious) 'Author's comment' here; that was unintentional.
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 9 2015 at 10:34 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

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Thank you, means a lot!
honest_iago BRONZE said...
on Mar. 20 2015 at 12:16 am
honest_iago BRONZE, Midway, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
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This is such a heartfelt and beautiful poem--you put so much emotion in a short piece!
Beila BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2015 at 12:10 am
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Yes! Thank you! I have nothing to add; you've said it perfectly.
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 17 2015 at 8:02 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Thank you very much, @NaturesInk !
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Very relatable, impacting for sure. I love how you made this short poem mean so much, wonderful work! :)