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Something Stirs

August 17, 2014
By Roseate PLATINUM, San Ramon, California
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Roseate PLATINUM, San Ramon, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is too short to be anything but happy."

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I feel
something--
it's warm,
hot,
compared to
the ice that
froze me before.
In front of me,
I see
your face,
your honey brown eyes
searching for--
for what?
A smile appears--
wait,
were you waiting
for me?
I look down--
your hand is
intertwined
with mine.
Something stirs
inside my heart--
I wouldn't call it
"love",
but as you grin,
I decide that
I wouldn't mind
if one day
that happened to be the case.

© Edgard B., Coral Springs, FL

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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 23 2014 at 9:55 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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This is beautiful and fantastic! I love it, your poem. I can connect it to some ways. This is definitely 5 stars ^_^ I can't believe no-on has commented on your poem besides me and Miss Orange. Thank you for sharing this. 
Roseate PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 21 2014 at 3:06 am
Roseate PLATINUM, San Ramon, California
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&quot;Life is too short to be anything but happy.&quot;

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Thanks, MO! I'll definitely keep going. c: It's just sometimes when I write poetry, I don't always put it on here. A majority I don't put on here actually. Thank you for your support!
Miss_Orange SILVER said...
on Aug. 19 2014 at 4:28 pm
Miss_Orange SILVER, Makati, Other
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&quot;I&#039;m OK, I&#039;m Fine and I&#039;m alright are the greatest lies people tell each other everyday.&quot; By Me.

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This makes me feel fluffy, Rosie! You're getting better after every peice, methinks. :) keep going, ok?