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Make a Difference

June 21, 2014
By TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

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Woke up this morning.
Having great confidence in myself.
Ready to face anything I can meet up on my way.
All of a sudden I got lost in darkness.
The world I knew "Where Is It?!"
Walked around searching for that fragment of light.
Hatred and anger.
I saw it in their eyes.
Broken hearts.
I heard them falling apart.
Tears drops falling off their cheeks.
Where is the moment we needed the most?!
Where is Love and Carring?!
Prayed to God:
"Take me back to where I can find hope and feel love!"
So much Pain but no one cares.
A simple teenage girl:
"Do I have the POWER to Make a Difference?!"

© Kelly L., Brooklyn, NY

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Be the Change you wish to see in the world ^_^
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TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 20 2014 at 8:21 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

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Thanks I appreciate your support ^_^
Paully-C1801 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 19 2014 at 1:20 pm
Paully-C1801 BRONZE, Sidney, Iowa
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love life to live, live life to love.

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Oh so true i wonder where the love hope has gone Very well written keep it up!
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 13 2014 at 11:06 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

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My pleasure moderdayEmilyDickinson ^_^ Thank you for supporting my work I just love seeing your comments and knowing what you think about my poems It's an honnor really !! Thanks again :) By the way you too are wonderful ^_^
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 1:05 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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How often I've felt like this! I still think to myself, 'Do I have the power to mae a difference?" We do, it's just sometimes we feel like we don't. I love it, TheComet! So wonderful, just like you are! ^_^ thank you, for sharing this!
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 9 2014 at 12:34 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

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Hahaha!!! LOL I'm pretty sure we DO ;) I don't know why nut somehow knowing that somewhere in this world there are poeple who feel the same way as I do, well somehow it makes me feel better cuz then I know that I'm no longer alone and that what i'm feeling isn't wierd lol Actually i'm just happy and thrilled to finally be where i BELONG "in Poetry World" ;)
Princess.Renda GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2014 at 8:08 pm
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust.&quot; --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

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This poem is so powerful! It discribes days I often have, where the day starts out great, then crumbles. I never thought about making a difference myself. It is a great way to change the day around. I also love the part with the prayer to God to take you back. It reminds me of my poem My Haunting Joy! I guess we read each other's minds XD
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 30 2014 at 12:35 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Love the way you start out like "Yeah today is my day" and then you end as if the world is falling apart before your eyes. It was interesting and flowed really well.  Great job!! :)
Miss_Orange SILVER said...
on Jun. 27 2014 at 6:14 pm
Miss_Orange SILVER, Makati, Other
6 articles 0 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;m OK, I&#039;m Fine and I&#039;m alright are the greatest lies people tell each other everyday.&quot; By Me.

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hey Comet! I like how this opens with optimism and ends with doubt. very well done!
HayatC. PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 27 2014 at 5:31 pm
HayatC. PLATINUM, Louisville, Kentucky
25 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do not pray for an easy life, pray for the strength to endure a difficult one.&quot;

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Yes you absolutely do, especially with those beautiful and elegant words of yours:) wonderful poem! 5/5 stars!