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Trying to Explain it

June 13, 2014
By Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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"To be a writer is a condition, not a profession." -Robert Frost

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Locked in my head
Trapped by my mouth
Protected by my heart and soul
Wanting to escape but never told
When told to be free
Oh how I fear thee
And cannot proceed
This feeling in me isn't but a game to me
It's real life
A living hell
With a human being
With only a single soul to believe me
Misdiagnosis for years to come
I'm nearly done

© Treza R., Kalispell, MT

The author's comments:
I've been trying to get doctors to believe me and what is actually wrong with me but they never believe me. The only person to believe me is my girlfriend and no doctors think there is actually something wrong with me, they think I am faking or over thinking as my new therapists says.
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Decipher SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2014 at 11:26 am
Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Thank you! And of course I'll read!
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 15 2014 at 1:16 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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This is really good, you did a great job explaining how you felt about what they tell you, and I think this is an amazing poem! Keep writing! XD And don't give up hope, if your girlfriend believes you, someone else is bound to believe you as well. :P   Could you reaqd my story? I need some feedback. :)  TeenInk.com/fiction/thriller_mystery/article/686391/The-Dreams-that-Keep-Gettign-Darker/