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Forest of Shadows

May 6, 2014
By Moises BRONZE, Reynosa, Other
Moises BRONZE, Reynosa, Other
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Not knowing how I got there,
I started wandering around.
It was autumn, I could tell by the air
and because the leaves were all colored brown.
By a cypress tree, I laid,
and woke up by a scream of aid.
It was already late night
and Zeus had made his way into the sky.
As I looked for the stranger,
I was caught by a great danger:
between the thunder and the lightning,
a countless number of shadows started sparkling.
I kept walking terrified
and this evil chase became a delight,
so when I found whoever for help screamed,
I told him “do not fear this is just like a dream”.
But when he saw me, his face turned pale
and then ran as if he did from hell.
Disappointed, I sat on the ground
as the shadows gathered in a circle around.
And then in my head began a dwell:
Am I one of this shadows as well?



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Moises BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2014 at 8:31 pm
Moises BRONZE, Reynosa, Other
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Gee thanks a lot. I had stopped writting because I thought no one liked the things I write. I started reading your poems. I liked them. I will keep an eye on your work too. Thanks  a lot.

on Jul. 22 2014 at 6:10 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

LOL I forgot to say that you truly have a talent so keep oon writing okay ;) that's all for now :P

on Jul. 22 2014 at 6:09 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

I gotta say that I really really like the suspense you put out i  this poem!! It was really well written. I love the subject by the way ^_^ Keep on writing and I'll keep an eye on you ;)