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Winter MAG

November 12, 2008
By Aniko Gomory BRONZE, Tallahassee, Florida
Aniko Gomory BRONZE, Tallahassee, Florida
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Sprinkles of snow
One week later

Breath unfurls from lips that whispered
Excitement flushes through already
Reddened cheeks
The chill inhaled returns as smoke

Sleet decorates town into a fantasyland
Where angels are made
And children turn into eskimos
Until the call of hot chocolate is too tempting to resist

Sweater upon sweater
Upon layer upon layer
New boots are quickly worn
And the cool hurries along

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This article has 10 comments.

Free- GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2011 at 7:33 pm
Free- GOLD, Blllll, Kentucky
14 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe in you and I believe in me, and I believe that we are not meaningless."
"What a waste of a perfectly good wrist."

stunning....keep writing!

gleek1234 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 5:17 pm
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
17 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

good poem i really hat winter 

on Oct. 10 2010 at 6:07 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

I like it alot! :) five stars all the way! please check out my work, i would love to hear ur opinion! THANKS FOR POSTING!

on Aug. 28 2010 at 10:20 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

definitely "cool" images in the piece and alongside it. read some of mine?

on Apr. 12 2010 at 5:11 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Nice. i like it. Keep writing.

And please check out my work. Ratings are GREATLY appreciated. Thanks!

Bethani GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 8:56 pm
Bethani GOLD, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
10 articles 0 photos 508 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is perfect until you sit back and realize how boring it is without risks.

I don't get what your talking about with all the different groups. What are you trying to say?

on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:09 pm
DestinyMartinez PLATINUM, Boca Raton, Florida
23 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never know that you love someone untill they're gone."

Wow, this is really good. I love the detail in this. You’re a great writer. You should really check out some of my writing I think you will like it. Our writing is similar in a way. Please comment and rate too. Thank you.

chelle-bear said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 11:52 am
chelle-bear, East Providence, Rhode Island
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
be who you are and say what you mean because those who matter dont mind and those who mind dont matter ~Dr. Seuss

i don't like winter, but i love this poem. it captures winter perfectly. =] and i love the mug in the picture

Sanah BRONZE said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 11:05 pm
Sanah BRONZE, Bridgewater, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no exquisite beauty without some strangeness in the proportion" -Edgar Allan Poe

i adore winter, as well as hot chocolate! ahah, your very talented Aniko. i love it (:

on Aug. 14 2009 at 3:52 am
TheUnknownGuest GOLD, Woodbridge, Virginia
14 articles 4 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can't remember it clearly, but it went something like this:

"The past is the past, the future is the furture. But now, now is like a gift, which is why it is called present."

That's very interesting.