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You Will Realize

January 30, 2014
By dreamcatcher77 BRONZE, Congers, New York
dreamcatcher77 BRONZE, Congers, New York
4 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People change things go wrong but just remember life goes on"

Who knew that friendship could be transient?
And your words would be so trivial
But, there was nothing I could do
to make you comprehend

All the sincere help I've provided
and advice given to you
was effortless and futile
You were simply misguided

I tried and tried.
You, walking away from me
Ignoring me at all costs
I knew that the mature side of you had slowly
And our friendship died within your callous soul

You told me we were like stars
that our friendship makes the sky radiate
but in reality, you were dragging me down
like smoky burnt ashes from cigars

Maybe it is best for me to stay away
You only disrupt my equilibrium
Easily lost in my thoughts and not
awakened to reality

The friend I once knew does not exist
The demon has entered inside you
Influencing the minds of the innocent
Fulfilling your own desires

I try to be a good friend but you reject
You think you’re like Einstein
Who can find the answer to all our problems
But your solution is an empty set

When I’m gone you will come to a recognition
that your world is filled with dismay.
And the only friends you have,
are yourself and your addiction

So farewell
when I leave
a part of you will be leaving too
and that part shall

The author's comments:
When somebody tries to help you and give you advice, take their words into consideration. Friends only want to help you not harm you. Learn from your mistakes instead continuing to make more.

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on Mar. 3 2014 at 8:13 pm
Shadow_Wolf GOLD, Mayfield Heigts, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is not opening your eyes but opening your heart."
"You see not with your eyes, But with your heart."
"Think first with your heart not your head."
"If it has a heart, It is human."

Wow.... VERY IMPRESSIVE.... I love how you split up never come back.... it packs a powerful punch and the story within is worth 1000 pictures.... GREAT JOB...

on Mar. 3 2014 at 8:13 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank

With fantastic phrasing and exposed emotions, this poem is beautifully crafted xoxo

Harri SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2014 at 9:23 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Nice job, mate! Love the description ans effort put into this!

on Feb. 27 2014 at 9:18 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
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on Feb. 23 2014 at 8:49 pm
mai_khanxoxo BRONZE, New City, New York
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"They asked me for drugs, so I told them about your smile"

GO PEESH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Feb. 12 2014 at 6:09 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

I can relate to everything you have said... Every little word, for I have a friend just like this... tho it has been so long since we talked i never gave up on her.. She is comeing around... Never give up on someone you care about.. just give it time, and it may take awhile, but sooner or later your friend will realize that they did you wrong, they will try to be friends again, but if they don't i am sorry... i am always on chat so if you ever wanna talk i will be here to listen..

on Feb. 12 2014 at 7:37 am
skydancer666 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
10 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
on my own i am clumsy ..... but on your shoulders i am free to be me

this is very good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hms1214 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 11 2014 at 10:23 am
Hms1214 BRONZE, Cochranton, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments
love this!! it has wonderful meaning. amazing peotry. 

on Feb. 11 2014 at 3:06 am BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
You reap what you sow.

The ending is very nice. The theme is good too. Just work on your display a lil bit. Try to make it sound more emotional and expressive.
And read my work too. Rate and comment!
thanks :) 

on Feb. 10 2014 at 4:56 pm
Authorintraining88 GOLD, Somewhere:p, Massachusetts
11 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are the universe experiencing itself

Ahh I love this! So well written!  

on Feb. 9 2014 at 7:04 pm
francheskas SILVER, San Diego, California
6 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing." -Benjamin Franklin

marvelous meaning 

on Feb. 9 2014 at 7:01 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

Wonderful diction 

on Feb. 7 2014 at 10:01 pm
SabrinaMKoss PLATINUM, New City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Every kiss is a cursive line, every touch is a redefining phrase.

so wonderful!