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Oh Cry

April 30, 2013
By zoosteddy GOLD, St. Elizabeth, Alabama
zoosteddy GOLD, St. Elizabeth, Alabama
13 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
walk good and good duppy follow you: Ms. Lewis BennetE

old hearts of sorrow, cursed by the night to forever stay in its shadows only to regret the past
and blame the future
never looking a head bleeding from my eyes, a heart that felt its final beat years ago still aches
i dream of one day letting go
running away from all this or to die and start again.
ive felt it for thousands of years the loneliness that consumes you
watching everyone you knew grew

old to feel the sweet kiss of death or to give birth to a soul.
i yell creating hovack on the earth leaving my mark
id imagined how it is to love
to lost to feel anything other than emptiness, the hollow.

The author's comments:
its about a female vampire who regrets everything and hopes that one day she will die. she gets angry when other people grow old and give birth she wish she could have loved and lost.

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on May. 22 2013 at 8:25 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

You're very good at creating an image, but I think you could work on formatting. If it were structured better, it might make more of an impact. Anyways, it was still really good, and creative XD