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A Tree With A Million Rings

April 18, 2013
By FemmeGeek BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
FemmeGeek BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Be soft. Do not let the world make you hard. Do not let pain make you hate. Do not let the bitterness steal your sweetness. Take pride that even though the rest of the world may disagree, you still believe it to be a beautiful place.&rdquo;<br /> ― Kurt Vonnegut


The stuffy smell
like over ripe fruit clings to my senses.
I get a prickly feeling as I see wrinkled forms
connected to breathing tubes,
slouching in wheel chairs,
eyes glazed with age.
And you. My grandfather.
Still alive. Still breathing. Still talking.
But on a different medium.
The medium of trees with
a million rings.
Walking through the hot hallways.
The air filled with tired souls, slowing my steps.
After only ten minutes.
You’re tired.
You want to go sit down
and rest.
As you talk about something
we nod our heads at you and each other.
As if what you’re saying makes sense.
When it really doesn’t.


The author's comments:
This poem is about my grandfather. He is currently living in a nursing home. I wrote about the feeling there and the physical sensations of age. This was not an easy and happy poem to write.

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on Nov. 20 2013 at 5:15 pm
FemmeGeek BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Be soft. Do not let the world make you hard. Do not let pain make you hate. Do not let the bitterness steal your sweetness. Take pride that even though the rest of the world may disagree, you still believe it to be a beautiful place.&rdquo;<br /> ― Kurt Vonnegut

Thank you so much! It isn't easy but it's a path to healing.

on Nov. 19 2013 at 8:52 pm
I know what it's like to write a difficult poem. I'm glad you have shared this part of your life with us, even if it's a painful part. This is a beautiful but sad piece.