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Goodbye, to late though

April 13, 2013
By Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

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I'm sorry I never got to say but,
I miss your laugh, I miss your smile,
I miss how your spirit and soul comfoted the storm,
That I was going through,
You were filled with no judgement on my behalf,
You were my stone that kept me from drowning,
You are my life persever I clutch comfoting,
Embracing the good I know I can be with you by my side,
I remember the nights where the terrors of the world over came me,
And your smile brighten my life, As you protect me,
Keeping the monsters at bay, You hear what I say,
The sound of your voice sent chils down my spine,
But now the hallways are silent of that velvet voice,
The nigths that are lonley without you by my side sends a tear down my hand as I try to wipe away the tears,
And your eyes transfixed, as I long to see them glowing and grinning with pleasure of loving you forever and always,
So thank you my friend for being by my side even if you had to leave without me, without a good-bye,
Thank you for your life and binding yours to mine,
I miss you and will always wait to meet you again so goodbye dear friend all see you soon enough.

© Austin K., Studio City, CA

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KkatKreationz PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 11 2014 at 8:26 pm
KkatKreationz PLATINUM, Minerva, Ohio
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&quot;Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken.&quot; :) <br /> -Me.

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Creative and Beautiful. Goodjob :)
Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Jul. 26 2013 at 11:09 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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Aw this is very emotional; it expresses the turmoil one goes through when seperating. Jeez, metaphors come soo easy to you dont they? they run effortless in your poems and are almost hypnotic. My favorite line is, "Keeping the monsters at bay." Wonderful; ur such an AMAZING WRITER! lol
maelstrom14 GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2013 at 10:22 pm
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
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so good.
Monicaa GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2013 at 3:19 pm
Monicaa GOLD, North Las Vegas, Nevada
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Love It :) Its Sad but Deep :) <3
MeggieMills SILVER said...
on Apr. 19 2013 at 4:47 pm
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So ... sad - but creative! KEEP ON GOING!!!
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
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This was really cool! Very emotional and heartfelt. I like ur style, and u snuck a few rhymes in there, which I liked. 5 stars !! ;)
GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 6:47 am
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This is good. It captures your emotions very well. Good imagery! I’m not usually a fan of free verse, but I like this poem! Keep it up! You’re a good writer!!!!!!!! *****