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October 15, 2012
By shizlet BRONZE, BF, Other
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\"Think left and think right think low and think high Oh, the things you could think up if only you try\"- Dr.Suess

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A crow.
A coal black, innocent crow.
Hated, Hurt, Ignored.
Waiting, for someone, something that could show him love.
Nothing.
All alone, he dove toward a strong unchanging current.
Gone, unnoticed.

© Jacqueline T., Flower Mound, TX

The author's comments:
This poem was inspired by an article I recently read online. The purpose of this poem is to show readers that you should always treat others with respect and show them kindness because you never know how your actions can change peoples lives forever.
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shizlet BRONZE said...
on Oct. 21 2012 at 7:53 pm
shizlet BRONZE, BF, Other
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\&quot;Think left and think right think low and think high Oh, the things you could think up if only you try\&quot;- Dr.Suess

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thank you bro :)
shizlet BRONZE said...
on Oct. 21 2012 at 7:52 pm
shizlet BRONZE, BF, Other
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;Think left and think right think low and think high Oh, the things you could think up if only you try\&quot;- Dr.Suess

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thank you :)
Jerimiah_15 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 21 2012 at 3:56 pm
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Good work :) enjoyed it!
byebye said...
on Oct. 21 2012 at 3:52 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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I really liked this. It was short and to the point but it still maintained a sort of 'longing' throughout. Well done; can't wait to see more from you! :)
shizlet BRONZE said...
on Oct. 17 2012 at 4:32 pm
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noooo! not about me! im a happppy person :)
Smileykin234 SILVER said...
on Oct. 17 2012 at 3:39 pm
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Wait is this about you, im not juding but just wondering. Anyway what a wonderful poem, 5 stars, and i would love to see more of your work.
AnthonyDavidHall PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 17 2012 at 10:49 am
AnthonyDavidHall PLATINUM, Valrico, Florida
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My advice is the exact opposite. Poetry doesnt have to be aggressive or tense. Ever read Blake? Keats? Go by your own flow.
shizlet BRONZE said...
on Oct. 16 2012 at 8:40 pm
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thank you for the tips! This is the first time I actually tried writting a free verse, so next time I will try to use your tips, thank you! :)
AndSoItGoes01 SILVER said...
on Oct. 16 2012 at 8:37 pm
AndSoItGoes01 SILVER, Reno, Nevada
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I thought it was really good. It had ok description (: and a lot of feeling. You just need to improve on length and building of tension. Poems are usually meant to be really aggressive and meaningful. Don't worry TOO much about how flowy it is, it will get the reader unfocused on the mian point. Instead stick to the topic and make it your own. This was really good, but i think you could do better. Thanks for writing it (: 4/5 stars
AndSoItGoes01 SILVER said...
on Oct. 16 2012 at 8:37 pm
AndSoItGoes01 SILVER, Reno, Nevada
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I thought it was really good. It had ok description (: and a lot of feeling. You just need to improve on length and building of tension. Poems are usually meant to be really aggressive and meaningful. Don't worry TOO much about how flowy it is, it will get the reader unfocused on the mian point. Instead stick to the topic and make it your own. This was really good, but i think you could do better. Thanks for writing it (: 4/5 stars
shizlet BRONZE said...
on Oct. 16 2012 at 8:27 pm
shizlet BRONZE, BF, Other
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\&quot;Think left and think right think low and think high Oh, the things you could think up if only you try\&quot;- Dr.Suess

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Thank you so much :)
Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 16 2012 at 8:23 pm
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amazing job.short,but full of feeling.i like it.5 stars ^_^
shizlet BRONZE said...
on Oct. 16 2012 at 8:22 pm
shizlet BRONZE, BF, Other
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;Think left and think right think low and think high Oh, the things you could think up if only you try\&quot;- Dr.Suess

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awh, Thank you :) it means a lot!
Gecko GOLD said...
on Oct. 16 2012 at 8:13 pm
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I love this poem--its simple, yet it says so much. great writing!