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Lake Superior Shore
August 10, 2012
Fog on the water
Jagged shorelines
Large boulders
Piles of pebbles
A rush of peace.
Face it head on
Soak it up
Lock it in
An image
Of that lichen-covered shore
It’s important
That you take it in
So you can bring it home
With rock-filled pockets
And picture-filled cameras
A memory
Of that depth of peace
Scoop it up
Tuck it in your heart
A fond recollection
Kept
For after the dream is shattered
When you leave it behind
© Annie Y., Northborough, MA
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realbeautifulheart PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 4 2012 at 9:20 am
I liked this! It was very descriptive and sweet. I would just say to practice working with varied structure and making your poems longer because I think that yours would be very good. :)
loveisntreal GOLD said...
on Aug. 28 2012 at 7:05 pm
this is a really good poem. i felt like i was actually there in the scenery. :)))
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