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Diamond tears

July 21, 2012
By albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
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Diamond tears that graze her perfect face
What has the world done to you
The sparkle the shine once in her mind
Slide down trembling lips to polluted grounds

Golden blood spills from her wrist
As her teeth clench to contain her screams
A silent world is too loud to hear her pleads
Words to actions yet nothing sets her free

Silver knifes puncture her heart
They can never touch her soul
Leaving the world behind
My ultimate treasure flies
I watch with Diamond tears
Burning in my eyes

© Sadra L., Buckeye, AZ

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evalash PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 11 2012 at 9:49 pm
evalash PLATINUM, Jennings, Louisiana
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im really impressed ,its really good and i can relate to it keep up the good work
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 5:57 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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I was like this is gonna be sad but happy sad (saying that in my mind). And its not what I exepected and I like that. Nice Job!
CorianderLee BRONZE said...
on Aug. 1 2012 at 8:37 pm
CorianderLee BRONZE, Chesapeake, Virginia
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love it! :)

great imagery 

sumer44 GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2012 at 10:01 am
sumer44 GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Great imagery! This was an amazing poem!
Allicat001 SILVER said...
on Jul. 24 2012 at 3:06 pm
Allicat001 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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You're comparing tears to diamonds and blood to gold was absolutely genius!  Amazing job:)
albinotiger GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 9:53 am
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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THANK YOU 4 the comment! ill try to use more imagery in my poems thanks :)
DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 9:48 am
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At first when I read this I was like okay another sad poem. Then when I go to the second stanza I was like okay this is good. My favorite line I watch with diamond tears. Such a good use of imagery. Suggestion: use more imagery cause your good at that.
Thecuddlywhatsit BRONZE said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 9:28 am
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this is really good!

 

hippiechick99 GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 9:27 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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This is such an amazing poem. Even though me, as a reader, didn't know what was happening at times, it's very beautiful. I like the comparing her blood to gold and her tears to diamonds, I never would've thought of that. I almost cried at the end. I think you accomplished what you were going for. Good job and keep writing :)))))
nakubara PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 9:25 am
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
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You amaze me, i have read alot of you r work and you are awesome! Keep it up!