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July 9, 2012
By MonicaSkittles BRONZE, My Town, Indiana
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&quot;Although when there were too many people around-which there certainly were today-it was hard even to remember to say thank you: all those people were like drowning.&quot;-<br /> Robin Mckinley; Pegasus

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My mind is like a little house,
My peers break into.
They rearrange my furniture,
And the cabinets rifle through.
They throw things out,
They put things it,
And erase the writing on the wall,
And by the time that they walk out,
it's not my mind at all.

© Lauren S., Reading, Berkshire, UK

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Let me know what you think! This isn't my first draft, but I might continue tweaking it. :)
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MonicaSkittles BRONZE said...
on Jul. 13 2012 at 11:51 am
MonicaSkittles BRONZE, My Town, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Although when there were too many people around-which there certainly were today-it was hard even to remember to say thank you: all those people were like drowning.&quot;-<br /> Robin Mckinley; Pegasus

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Thank you so much!

I'm really glad you like it!

Aeliss-Novak-the-Zombie-Space-Pirate BRONZE said...
on Jul. 13 2012 at 11:35 am
Aeliss-Novak-the-Zombie-Space-Pirate BRONZE, That Place With All The Trees And Stuff, Oregon
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Impossible is not a word, just a reason not to try.~Kutless<br /> <br /> I&#039;m going to smile and make you think I&#039;m happy, I&#039;m going to laugh, so you don&#039;t see me cry, I&#039;m going to let you go in style, and even if it kills me - I&#039;m going to smile.~Anonymous

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This is great! It's so true.