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June 10, 2012
By bigblue GOLD, New Market, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"All you need is Love."-The Beatles

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I see through the words,
And the actions.
I know them all too well.
I've heard them all before,
And will hear them all again.
But in the end,
You're just another mistake.
Just another,
Slap in the face.
Hello, reality.
Goodbye, cloud nine.
I free fall through the skies of love,
And land flat on my face.
I lie there,
Until I slowly,
So slowly,
Pick myself up.
You are behind me.
And the world is ahead.
Hello, world.
Goodbye, mistake.
It does not matter how many times I fall,
But how many times I rise.
I hold on to hope.
And I know,
All will be well.
All is not over.
Hope is not lost.
There is goodness still.

© Dominique D., Ozone Park, NY

The author's comments:
I wrote this to inspire people to push through the tough times, to remind that there is always hope, even when all seems to be lost.
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bigblue GOLD said...
on Jun. 28 2012 at 7:12 am
bigblue GOLD, New Market, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"All you need is Love."-The Beatles

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Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked it :)
bigblue GOLD said...
on Jun. 27 2012 at 10:11 pm
bigblue GOLD, New Market, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"All you need is Love."-The Beatles

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Im so gals you liked it! And you're quite welcome :)
MountEverest GOLD said...
on Jun. 27 2012 at 8:46 pm
MountEverest GOLD, Fort Worth, Texas
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&quot;Why rather, sleep, liest thou in smoky cribs <br /> ... <br /> Than in the perfumed chambers of the great, <br /> Under the canopies of costly state, <br /> And lulled with sound of sweetest melody?&quot; By William Shakespeare

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I LOVE THIS POEM ! It's seriously genius! :) And thanks again for you're comment on my poem
originalityisdeadd said...
on Jun. 27 2012 at 4:26 pm
originalityisdeadd, Upton, Massachusetts
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&quot;A bird does not lay awake at night and wonder if it is a good bird; A bird just flies.&quot;

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I love this (: Wow, you're great blueee.
bigblue GOLD said...
on Jun. 27 2012 at 4:07 pm
bigblue GOLD, New Market, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;All you need is Love.&quot;-The Beatles

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Cloud nine is sort of like a non-existing place that people use to describe the feeling of being giddy, on top of the world. And thank you :)
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 26 2012 at 1:20 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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&quot;Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all those who wander are lost&quot; --JRR Tolkien<br /> <br /> &quot;When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears.&quot; --Jose&#039; Bergamin

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I really like the meaning and how you described it.  What did you mean by "cloud nine"?  Very good job keep writing! :)
bigblue GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2012 at 10:25 pm
bigblue GOLD, New Market, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;All you need is Love.&quot;-The Beatles

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Thank you, so glad you liked it!
fakesmilesbigdreams PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 21 2012 at 7:00 pm
fakesmilesbigdreams PLATINUM, Rome, New York
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I really like the idea of this poem. No matter how many times you try, you know it's not worth it and you still carry on. Nice work!