So You Won't Notice | Teen Ink

So You Won't Notice

March 22, 2012
By justjosie PLATINUM, Scottsburg, Indiana
justjosie PLATINUM, Scottsburg, Indiana
38 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love a girl who writes,
and live her many lives;
you have yet to find her,
beneath her words of guise."

Some walk in the rain
so no one
will see their tears

I smile at you
so you won’t see
my empty eyes

I sing out loud
so you won’t hear
my soul breaking scream

I dance in the street
so you won’t feel
my shaking sobs

Some walk in the rain
I smile, sing, and dance with you
so you won’t notice

I’m dying inside

Similar Articles


This article has 4 comments.

on Mar. 27 2012 at 10:24 pm
TheMusicNeverStopped96 BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
2 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe that marriage isn't between a man and woman, but between love and love." Frank Ocean

wow, this is amazing! love it

TapTap SILVER said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 3:54 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

You captured the character so's breathtaking. It could not be better....ONTO MY FAVORITES!!!

isx2b said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 9:34 am
isx2b, Fairfield, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments
I love this poem! It's short but sweet. Your words can draw a picture that I can clearly see. That's one thing that a good poet must be abled to execute.

Ekf07 GOLD said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 8:46 am
Ekf07 GOLD, Huntersville, North Carolina
16 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The expert at anything was once a beginner.All writers are crazy. So never mind what the editors, your family and your critique group tells you. Submit your manuscripts and keep submitting until you get an offer. Then you can be crazy, with a payc

Aw. sad. This is beutifully writen. Great job!