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February 8, 2012
By Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
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Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;What, do you really think I was<br /> strong enough to handle it?<br /> If you did, then sweetie, you<br /> don&#039;t know me at all.<br /> These &quot;smiles&quot; are fake.<br /> Just another lie people bought.<br /> You will never know the disaster<br /> that&#039;s behind them.&quot; -Anonymous

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Love...

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sucha unexplainable word,

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sucha sneeky trap,

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sucha unreliable feeling.
 
You don't know how to explain it so you get sucked into finding the meaning.
 
You let it take your world, you rotate around, it becoming your center.
 
trust, courage, bravery, happiness, honesty, etc,
they can get ruined easily by the poison in a veil called heart break.
 
It kills you slowly.
 
Cracking the walls of your heart,
stabbing your gut,
bringing your life down.
 
Convincing you, in the end, you're a fool & will never find anything.

The author's comments:
Written: 03/28/11
This poem describes love in a negative way, which I think about when it comes to heart break. Though it is the best feeling in the world, so hard to explain, it can be a sneaky trap you get sucked into.
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Shortty1314 GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 6:22 pm
Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
14 articles 2 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;What, do you really think I was<br /> strong enough to handle it?<br /> If you did, then sweetie, you<br /> don&#039;t know me at all.<br /> These &quot;smiles&quot; are fake.<br /> Just another lie people bought.<br /> You will never know the disaster<br /> that&#039;s behind them.&quot; -Anonymous

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you're very welcome (:
WithShatteredWings SILVER said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 5:43 pm
WithShatteredWings SILVER, Choteau, Montana
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You are everything I want cause you are everything I&#039;m not-Taking back sunday<br /> <br /> Everything you do in life is insignificant but it is very important that you do-Gandhi<br /> <br /> Happiness is an inside job- papa

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It's how I exactly feel... I'm going through what your saying and your poetry makes me feel better about it. Thank you.
Shortty1314 GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2012 at 8:31 pm
Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;What, do you really think I was<br /> strong enough to handle it?<br /> If you did, then sweetie, you<br /> don&#039;t know me at all.<br /> These &quot;smiles&quot; are fake.<br /> Just another lie people bought.<br /> You will never know the disaster<br /> that&#039;s behind them.&quot; -Anonymous

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Thank you (:
Angelgirl39 GOLD said...
on Feb. 18 2012 at 9:41 pm
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\&quot;I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\&quot;<br /> ~Robert Frost<br /> <br /> \&quot;Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\&quot;<br /> ~Edgar Allan Poe

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pretty!!! I think it is very nice it flowed nicely