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Just Some Lines MAG

January 29, 2012
By ThreeLittleBirds SILVER, Oak Park, California
ThreeLittleBirds SILVER, Oak Park, California
5 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some people care too much. I think it's called love" -- Winnie the Pooh


He asks me
To write some lines
Of love for him to read
For the pocket in his jacket

I smile
And grab paper
But when I hold the pen
I'm at a loss



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on Nov. 10 2012 at 5:43 pm
Imaginedangerous PLATINUM, Riverton, Utah
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I love how you can communicate a complex relationship so completely in just a few words. Good job.

on Jul. 5 2012 at 2:02 pm
ThreeLittleBirds SILVER, Oak Park, California
5 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some people care too much. I think it's called love" -- Winnie the Pooh

That means a lot to me thank you so much! I'm glad you like it :)

Vidra PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2012 at 7:42 pm
Vidra PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
46 articles 17 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I write only because
There is a voice within me
That will not be still.”
-Sylvia Plath

Oh, wow. This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read. I love it so much. The way you said so much in so little, it just hits you. So powerful. Definitely going on my favorites list!