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January 14, 2012
By chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Love is written on the palm
of the hand that he last held.
Blinded by love you see only
what your heart reveals to you.
Your scarred heart is in anguish
but still you refuse
to let yourself see the truth.
You try to hide your pain
but your tears are all too evident.
He is gone now,
but still your love for him remains.

© Ben Q., Marblehead, MA

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This is a poem i wrote in less than five minutes in english clas for a contest. I won :)
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This article has 17 comments.

XCBVIA GOLD said...
on Sep. 13 2013 at 9:07 pm
XCBVIA GOLD, Delaware, Ohio
14 articles 1 photo 28 comments

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NGU. Never give up.

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I'm back as XCBVIA!!!!! cross crountry buckeye valley is awesome!!!! LOL get it, x is cross, it's like our logo. I din't understand when i first saw it. Anyways, i'm BACK!!! and really like your work. I left like tons of other comments (hope you don't die of boredom reading them ;) ) so and i'ma put on some new stuff but it will be pending approval for a little while.
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 8:40 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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thanks :D ...
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 11:07 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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it's so like, rich- the words feel very pretty ^^ good work
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 8:22 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Omg. Thank you. I love it when my readers can relate. :D
Aginger GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 7:05 pm
Aginger GOLD, Bingen, Washington
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This is very well written and I can really relate to it because I am experiencing all those emotions at the moment. For someone who is going through that exact situation, I think you did an amazing job portraying what it feels like. Nice job!
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 2:21 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Yes I did comment on your song and it was amazing. Yes I'm more into the dark genre. No im not better than you. You are amazing. I think it's great that we have the same favorite authors. Do you like Edgar Allan Poe?
XCBVIA GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 1:18 pm
XCBVIA GOLD, Delaware, Ohio
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Hey, ya commented on my song Go Away. I checked this peom out, and though it was great! Just, it's a little dark. I kinda think your probably better at writing songs, and poems than me. I like the same authors you do too! :D See, I write songs, raps ( or did, I quit because I thought I wasn't good- my first song, Missing, is a rap ), storys, and the occasional time, I start a movie. But anyways, 5 stars! It's great and keep writing!
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:11 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Thanks written! you always have such nice things to say. But you are way better than me, girl!
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:10 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Aww thanks. You're sweet. Can't wait to look at your articles/art. :D
Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 11:42 am
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I love it! It's an interesting take on love. Congratulations on winning the contest, it's clear why :) 5 stars!
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 1:05 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Love this!! You are wonderful girl! Ill say it over and over! You deserved to win too! 5/5
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 7:25 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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Heyyyy. thanx. Ily too lex.
electra_wolf BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 8:35 am
electra_wolf BRONZE, Colorado City, Texas
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Hey. Great poem. ily bestie.
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 11:49 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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sure! :D THANK YOU BTW.
Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 7:01 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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Very cool - Kinda sad. Congrats on the contest :) Could you check out my poem - Once a Survivor, Forever a Fighter?
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 8:33 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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thanks. I wrote this in a rush for a class poetry contest. lol.
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 1:54 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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Congratulations. This is very true! Keep it up!