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September 25, 2011
By Ella1 GOLD,
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Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 1:06 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
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Thanks callie15 :)
callie15 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 11:53 pm
callie15 BRONZE, North Plains, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I dreamed I was a butterfly, flitting around in the sky; then I awoke. Now I wonder: Am I a man who dreamt of being a butterfly, or am I a butterfly dreaming that I am a man?&quot;<br /> -Chuang Tzu<br /> <br /> &quot;No man with a good car needs to be justified!&quot;<br /> -Wise Blood

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I agree with Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful. Poems that often times appear basic actually takes a lot of time: if one word seems out of place, you have to rethink the whole poem over again. Love the poem, Ella1!
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 8:38 pm
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons make grape juice. Then sit back and watch everyone look at you in amazement. :)

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Thank you. :)
Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 12:37 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
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Thanks Lilac, I read some of your work to and it is AMAZING!
Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 8:10 pm
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hehe this made me laugh :P I want a robot now :D
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 16 2011 at 10:48 pm
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Actually, stuff like this often takes a LONG time to get right. It's great, btw. :)

-Lilac

Studio_Riet GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 11:31 pm
Studio_Riet GOLD, Tonasket, Washington
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OOOooooooo!!! Kinda reminds me of the story I'm writing. . .

 

IRUEHL SILVER said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 6:51 pm
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haha looks like it took you 6 seconds :/