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words
September 1, 2011
word cold as a winters day
stabbing me like knives
never once do u ask how i feel
u just sI'mple say
these words that kill me
slowly inside
these words bring me tears
questioning why I'm still here
but u say these word anyway
cause u truly don't care
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This article has 10 comments.
darkened-love-writer PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 22 2011 at 1:10 pm
thanks for the feedback
UnknownToTheWorld PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 21 2011 at 1:07 pm
i really like this poem and the meaning behind it. it may be short but it has all the emotions
darkened-love-writer PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2011 at 12:55 pm
to justin beiber if u think this poem is horrible u really need to recunstruct ur comprehension of poetry.
to dont forget thanks for tellin him how it is lolz.
dontforget GOLD said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 2:32 pm
Write*****
dontforget GOLD said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 2:30 pm
That's kind. I'm sure you would love to have someone right such rude comments on your piece as well. Ever heard of constructive critisism?
justinbieber said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 8:12 am
i rated it one star i hated it it was demtedly disturbing whatbwere u thinking :l
darkened-love-writer PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 15 2011 at 12:53 pm
thank ill try nd get tht done.
dontforget GOLD said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 3:57 pm
I really like this concept, and totally agree with you. Although, I find some of these lines cliche, it's still pretty good. One suggestion I have is to use more dramatic adjectives for an intense emotion like this. Such as piercing me with a thousand knives, or as cold as a blistering winters day. Good job though:)
darkened-love-writer PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 12 2011 at 1:07 pm
i feel the exact same. i always tell people that ur words my not leave scars u can see but they do leave scars.
I totally agree with you and this poem. You know that saying, "sticks and stones can break my bones, but words will never hurt me?" I think words hurt even more. Enough is enough and people need to get over themselves and realize that they are no better than the person they are picking on.
