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I shall see MAG
July 29, 2011
I shall see your suffering soon,
only harsher than mine,
Given to you by the world
to me as a healing sign,
God will tell you how,
how expensive were my tears,
uncountable you gave,
like the days we spent which seemed
as never-ending years,
I shall see your heart break soon
into pieces such as mine,
over a person you'll think the world of,
yet the world sees as a gutter dime,
I shall see my friend,
the whole world shall see,
the result of my suffering,
through my eyes, your lies,
only this time the misery you'll attend.
© Tori W., Victoria, BC, Canada
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This article has 25 comments.
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 1:28 am
Emotional poem, I love it! Can you check out my work and rate and comment on it. It'll make my day. Thanks!
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Feb. 7 2012 at 5:55 am
Thank you! It means a lot. I'm sure you know how t feels like :')
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 7:26 am
thank you!
cookiegirl said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 7:21 am
This is beautiful and unique:). I love the way its written.
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 3:29 pm
Thank you and sure!
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 3:28 pm
Thank you!!!! :)
MarieLouiseA SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 6:44 am
This is brilliant (: keep writing!
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 1:57 pm
How?
sallysunshine2 said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 6:43 am
Seriously?
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SarahRoberts said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 6:37 am
You made your pont
SarahRoberts said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 6:36 am
Impressive. I liked your story, Once upon a Josh Miranda time. even better!
Emily56 said...
on Sep. 11 2011 at 4:00 am
I think it's quite harsh in a way.
muttomomi said...
on Sep. 11 2011 at 3:50 am
Exactly. I love the raw emotion.
muttomomi said...
on Sep. 11 2011 at 3:49 am
A very deep and well written poem. I loved it.
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Sep. 10 2011 at 2:52 am
Thank you and sure I'll love to go through your work. (:
AyeshaMuzaffar BRONZE said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 12:09 pm
Thank you. 3 comments on my first ever poem. I feel accomplished to be honest.