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June 27, 2011
By Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
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"To the world you may not be someone, but to someone you may be the world" and "Never frown because you never know who's fallen in love with your smile" <3

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Fearful butterflies flutter inside me.
I count the days till I can see you again.
When I'm with you,
I'm a different person.
Together we do crazy things.
Without you,
half my heart is missing.
Without you,
I no longer feel like me.
Without you,
I feel blind
But with you,
I see.

© Amanda P., Clermont, FL

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Sarah1311 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 18 2011 at 5:32 pm
Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
54 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;To the world you may not be someone, but to someone you may be the world&quot; and &quot;Never frown because you never know who&#039;s fallen in love with your smile&quot; &lt;3

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Thank you, both of you. :) I love your guesses thoughts and comments. :)
savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 9:40 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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You know, I actually do count down the days til I see my best friend again. :D I really like your poems.
TaleGate GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 4:07 pm
TaleGate GOLD, Clackamas, Oregon
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&quot;If you want the rainbow, you must put up with the rain.&quot;

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Simply beautiful, sweetie! :)