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Who Am I

May 23, 2011
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 306 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

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Today I ask my Friends,
Who am I?
A gust of wind,
or a broken smile?
A black hole,
or a closed shell?
Could I be a shinning star,
people who am I?
Could I be a blue flame,
or a tear of sadness?
Am I your friend,
or your enemy?
Could I be tamed,
or am I never to be?
A destruction just waiting to happen...
What about a hurricane,
a broken wind,
a creature of the night,
or an angel of daylight?
All I'm asking you is,
"Who am I?"

© Victor K., Las Vegas, NV

The author's comments:
"written because It was some things that come to my creative intelligent mind..And I just kind of put them together to come up with this."
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SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 7:51 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 306 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

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;P Lol buddy!
RINIVYAS SILVER said...
on Mar. 29 2012 at 9:43 am
RINIVYAS SILVER, Jodhpur, Other
7 articles 5 photos 11 comments

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heaven doesnt need me <br /> &quot;N&quot;<br /> hell is afraid i might take over.......

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ur wlcm buddy!
SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Mar. 29 2012 at 8:41 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 306 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

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Awe, really? Thanks RINIVYAS!:) :P
RINIVYAS SILVER said...
on Mar. 28 2012 at 9:32 am
RINIVYAS SILVER, Jodhpur, Other
7 articles 5 photos 11 comments

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heaven doesnt need me <br /> &quot;N&quot;<br /> hell is afraid i might take over.......

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u r sunshine.:P :)
itss nice.!
SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 7:35 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

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Wow thanks alot!:) And I sure will keep writing!
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 10:16 am
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
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&quot;Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing.&quot; ~Camille Pissarro

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I really enjoyed reading this. :) There is a sort of frantic honesty to it that creates a very powerful mood. Keep writing!
JustAnotherOwl SILVER said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 3:16 pm
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
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&quot;See, we don&#039;t really care who you are;<br /> Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.<br /> So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer&#039;s disease,<br /> And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Sanctuary&quot;- Paradise Fears

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This is wonderful! (: I really like the word choice!
SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Feb. 10 2012 at 8:04 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

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Hmm..well I tried to make it longer but it didnt turn out..I think it was meant to be like it is..sorry..I tried though:)
Loftus GOLD said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 8:34 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
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&quot;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who&#039;ll decide where you&#039;ll go.&quot; -Dr. Seuss

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This is really nice. I enjoyed this piece(:
SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Feb. 7 2012 at 7:47 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 306 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

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I might can see if I can make this published pieace longer..Just so you can see:) And thanks!
J-Poetry-R SILVER said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 3:40 pm
J-Poetry-R SILVER, Enterprise, Alabama
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

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&quot;My greatest writings are on the pages of life&quot;<br /> - J-Poetry-R

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All i know is your good at what you do, wish this was longer so i could see how truly good you are but as is nice work