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GOD SHINE

May 21, 2011
By SATVIK SILVER, Kanpur, Other
SATVIK SILVER, Kanpur, Other
7 articles 16 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
TO OBEY ANYTHING IS MORE DIFFICULT TO GIVE ADVICE TO OTHERS


WE HEARED FROM MY PARENTS IN CHILDHOOD THAT GOD IS EVERYWHERE
GOD IS SUPER DUPER POWER OF GLOBE WHO CREATE THE WORLD,
I HAVE NOT SEEN THE GOD ANY WHERE BUT I FEEL THE POWER
OF GODWHEN I WAS IN NEED.
NOBODY HAS SEEN THE GOD .
WHEN I AM GOING TO BECOME YOUTH I UNDERSTAND THE GOD AS...
HE IS GOD WHO HELPS OTHERS, WHO THINK FOR OTHERS
WHO HAVE NOTHING, BUT TRY TO GIVE HIS EVERYTHING TO OTHERS
I FEEL THE GOD IS IN MYSELF WITH MYSELF.
I PROUD OF MYSELF THAT GOD IS MINE. GOD IS WITH ME,
HE HELPS ME ,INSPIRED ME TO DO WORK FOR OTHERS
HE GAVE ME EVERYTHING WHAT I FEEL,TOUCH & SAID THAT
THIS IS MINE.
ACTUALLY I HAVE NOTHING & NOTHING IS MINE,
I HAVE TO LIVE ONLY WITH THOSE THINGS
YES GOD IS EVERYWHERE,
ALL LIVING & NON LIVING THINGSARE SWEET CREATURES OF GOD.
OXYGEN IS GODWE FEEL IT ON THE HEIGHTS OF MOUNTAINS,
WATER IS GOD FOR FARMERS,
WE USES GOD EVERY SECOND , EVERYWHERE BUT GOD NEVER USE ME.......


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on Jun. 3 2011 at 3:07 pm
Clarissa21 BRONZE, Gervais, Oregon
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Foeget what people say about the caps!

The poem is really good!

;)


on Jun. 2 2011 at 9:24 pm
screamingilyso SILVER, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
6 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
you were born an original, don't die a copy

i love the message in it completely,

the caps lock is kind of distracting.

grammar?


Bumbleshree said...
on Jun. 1 2011 at 5:46 pm
Yeah she's right caps make it seem loud and fake

on Jun. 1 2011 at 5:40 am
AnimalLoverNayNay, Hooksett, New Hampshire
0 articles 1 photo 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life sucks and then you die." Stephenie Meyer, Part 2, Preface,Page 134

Chaos                 

on May. 31 2011 at 11:36 pm
Lilly3217 SILVER, Holly Hill, Florida
6 articles 2 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
The best time to plant a Oak tree was twenty years ago the second best time is today.

i thought it was good but you shouldn't put it in all caps