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Growth

April 15, 2011
By maddiecochran PLATINUM, Bel Air, Maryland
maddiecochran PLATINUM, Bel Air, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
No, heaven's not a place that you go when you die
It's that moment in life when you touch her and you feel alive
So live for the moment
And take this advice, live by every word
Love's completely real, so forget anything that you've heard
And live for the moment now


Between summer mornings and
sweet spring rain
they stepped
into love
a light
in which winter gardens thawed
from their grey blue nights
as though freezing cold snow
was a dream for the year
and now
flower season
blossoms
the fruit of life



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on May. 18 2011 at 2:14 pm
maddiecochran PLATINUM, Bel Air, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
No, heaven's not a place that you go when you die
It's that moment in life when you touch her and you feel alive
So live for the moment
And take this advice, live by every word
Love's completely real, so forget anything that you've heard
And live for the moment now

That is so nice to hear. You have no idea how much nicer my day got! Thank You!

on May. 17 2011 at 2:47 pm
beautifulmudblood BRONZE, Grovetown, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Thomas Edison's last words were 'It's very beautiful over there'. I don't know where there is, but I believe it's somewhere, and I hope it's beautiful." -John Green (Looking For Alaska)

I think that this poem was absolutely brilliant. I loved the flow of every line into the next, and the imagery was so real. 

You're an amazing writer :)


on May. 16 2011 at 3:54 pm
maddiecochran PLATINUM, Bel Air, Maryland
32 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
No, heaven's not a place that you go when you die
It's that moment in life when you touch her and you feel alive
So live for the moment
And take this advice, live by every word
Love's completely real, so forget anything that you've heard
And live for the moment now

thank you very much!

Qwaazar BRONZE said...
on May. 16 2011 at 3:48 pm
Qwaazar BRONZE, Midland, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Is The Glass Half Full, Or Half Empty ?"

simple but complex in meditation...

nice