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Hello Fellow

January 18, 2011
By Mr-solo GOLD, Raleigh, North Carolina
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hello fellow cant you see
i want the color yellow from the buzzing bee
i want my favorite color blue from the silent see
i want to fill nothing for eternity
the sun is so bright so beautiful i must say
wishing i knew what more was there from day to day
wave by to me never say hi
my whole life is a goodbye
like yo yo ma play a beautiful song for me with a cello
you've already said bye so i say hello fellow

© Sarah M., Blairsville, PA

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PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 30 2011 at 5:17 pm
PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND, Parker, Colorado
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very interesting! i like your style of writing! only thing i saw was that you spelt sea wrong but other than that this was really good!! :)

also, if you get the chance could you take a look at my some of my poems such as A Mirror Image and The Sinners Confession (and comment and rate them????)  it would be greatly appreciated!! THANKS!