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Erase

January 14, 2011
By Vidra PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
Vidra PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
46 articles 17 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I write only because
There is a voice within me
That will not be still.”
-Sylvia Plath


I wish you could take an eraser to the heart,

And just erase.



Erase the hurt and lost loves,

The hoping that came to nothing,

The wishing that never came true,

The loneliness that was never resolved.



Erase the feelings that were wrong,

And the ones that were right,

But didn’t work out.



You would probably have a mess.



A weird and wonderful mixture of

Eraser shavings and

Multi-faceted feelings.



We’d all feel free

And when we got sad or hurt or lonely,

We could just
Erase.



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on Jan. 3 2014 at 2:41 pm
BandGeekAndProud PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
23 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
Albert Einstein

This is simple and beautiful. Excellent.

InkWriter13 said...
on Jun. 23 2012 at 1:06 pm
Superb writing once again. Well-written, crystal clarity, a clever concept. Brilliant, again, Vidra. I would love your comment on any and all of my work. (Just kidding about the all... :D ). You are a great writer. Keep writing! 

Vidra PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2011 at 2:59 pm
Vidra PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
46 articles 17 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I write only because
There is a voice within me
That will not be still.”
-Sylvia Plath

haha :) i think everyone would love to have one. thanks for commenting! :)

on Feb. 14 2011 at 8:32 pm
Volleystar15 GOLD, Wauconda, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You asked me what was wrong, i smiled and said NOTHING.
Then i turned around and whispered EVERYTHING."

"When i see you smile and know that is not for me, that is when i miss you the most."

that is so true. i would love to have my own eraser!!